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Quite catchy!

Got good build-up and mixing.

The only thing I would have liked was for you to play around more with the volume. There always seemed to be something that was loud - if the music was soft, the guy was saying 'the earthshaker'. Anyway, simply my impression, that it was always blaring.

Great mixing!

Awesome, dude! Got a good beat going with enough variation to keep it interesting. ;) Congrats.

Different!

I liked the beginning - the way it was at first unrecognisable. I'm tired of people just rehashing songs. You added nicely to it.

And yeah, I am adding another conflicting opinion into the mix of reviews you've received. =p

You have a sweet voice :3

Listening to your stuff, I think you're a genuinely musical person. Your voice doesn't dissolve (get inaudible) at places, which is good.

You recorded the guitar at the same time as singing, and it would be nice in two takes, so more than one note can be played at a time. I know it's complicated, but it would be learned eventually, even if you played chords at the same time.

takeflight responds:

Thank you :] I'm learning a whole bunch of chords right now, and I'm getting better but I just wanted to record this asap lol. Thank you very much for your review, and sorry for the late response :]

OK...

I don't analyse things too thoroughly, but your voice seems to waver on the pitch.
Also, take many takes on the singing - get the choruses done in one round, that way the lyrics can overlap.

good to go!

Nice mixing, and I agree with the other person that it builds up, so is workable as a loop but has a whole lot more potential as a full song. Got some interesting combinations in there.

Didn't think it was possible...

...to get something that perfectly matched the beat, but you did. =] (I really like TakeFlight's song)

To be honest, I don't like hip hop, but this is damn good. :) (plz take that as a compliment)

Mackity responds:

I'm real glad you enjoyed it. :) Thanks.

idk

Nice experimentation... I don't know trance that well, but I'd think the beats at the beginning need to be a bit softer. Just seems to jump right into it. Also, louder at certain parts (like 1.20)

takeflight responds:

Ok, that makes sense. I could definitely bring down the kick in the beginning so it kind of draws the listener in more, and the chorus is kind of a mess of sound right now, but I'll try to bring certain elements out more. Thank you for the review :]

Nice remix

Nice work with the keys. :)

Only thing is that it seems to not fit - the keyboard sounds too "genuine" compared to the distinctly synth background.

So catchy

It's rare that you can get a song that you can listen to over and over.

Also, when it's on repeat, it works as a loop :] (with the ends seeming like it died down a bit)

Nice pro work, mate

takeflight responds:

Yeah, replay value is definitely an important aspect to a song. Thanks for the review, and glad you enjoyed it!

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